TOPIC : 1.I think the selection of the topic about yourself and your life was interesting and suitable because can make people know you more. INTRODUCTION : 1.You have gain the audience attention greatly with some humor about simple introduction about yourself. 2.The introduction of the topic was quite clear but still can be improved. 3.The preview of the body of the speech was interesting. BODY : 1.The body for the speech was full of contents and the supporting details that relate to the topic. 2.The connectives used were not very clear. CONCLUSION : 1.You end the topic clearly and greatly but not summarize the topic compactly but still can be improved. 2.There were some memorable statements, some of them you deliver with sense of humor. LANGUAGES : 1.The language used was clear and can be understand. 2.There was some minor grammar error. 3.You used standard pronunciation and can be understand but still need to improve. DELIVERY : 1.There was some of non-verbal communication. 2.The voice projection was clear and can be heard. 3.The time management was very nice. 4.The eye contact with audience was good but still can be improved.
1. I think the selection of the topic about yourself and your life was interesting and suitable because can make people know you more.
INTRODUCTION :
1. You have gain the audience attention greatly with some humor about simple introduction about yourself.
2. The introduction of the topic was quite clear but still can be improved.
3. The preview of the body of the speech was interesting.
BODY :
1. The body for the speech was full of contents and the supporting details that relate to the topic.
2. The connectives used were not very clear.
CONCLUSION :
1. You end the topic clearly and greatly but not summarize the topic compactly but still can be improved.
2. There were some memorable statements, some of them you deliver with sense of humor.
LANGUAGES :
1. The language used was clear and can be understand.
2. There was some minor grammar error.
3. You used standard pronunciation and can be understand but still need to improve.
DELIVERY :
1. There was some of non-verbal communication.
2. The voice projection was clear and can be heard.
3. The time management was very nice.
4. The eye contact with audience was good but still can be improved.