Comment on 1st Speech Presentation by Hidayah

Topic

• The topic about yourself was specific and narrow enough. The topic also interesting, especially to whom like to know more about you.

Introduction

• Your speech gain attention.

• The topic was introduced clearly

• There was no preview body of the speech

Body

• Main points clear

• Supporting points clear

• Organizational pattern not very clear

• Connectives are quite clear.

Conclusion

• The conclusion was not very clear.

• There were several memorable statements.

Language

• Language clear and can be understand.

• Some grammar errors

• You used standard pronunciation

Delivery

• Some non-verbal communication

• Effective speaker’s voice and loud enough to be heard.

• Time management was well.

• You have eye contact with the audiences