Comment+on+1st+Speech+Presentation+by+Hidayah

Topic

 * ====The topic about yourself was specific and narrow enough. The topic also interesting, especially to whom like to know more about you.====

Introduction

 * ====Your speech gain attention.====
 * ====The topic was introduced clearly====
 * ====There was no preview body of the speech====

Body

 * ====Main points clear====
 * ====Supporting points clear====
 * ====Organizational pattern not very clear====
 * ====Connectives are quite clear.====

Conclusion

 * ====The conclusion was not very clear.====
 * ====There were several memorable statements.====

Language

 * ====Language clear and can be understand.====
 * ====Some grammar errors====
 * ====You used standard pronunciation====

Delivery

 * ====Some non-verbal communication====
 * ====Effective speaker’s voice and loud enough to be heard.====
 * ====Time management was well.====
 * ====You have eye contact with the audiences====

By the way, I enjoy with your presentation :)